ain t nothing like those summer nightsSummer Nights

Just recorded a rough draft of this track, want to know if the lyrics need any adjustments. I'll take any criticism, even from the haters. But seriously, any input will be helpful. Wish I could attach the track for your listening pleasure as well. Thanks in advance:

"Summer Nights"
by Soft Spoken

(Verse 1)
I can feel it in the air finally summer's coming
Can't believe it's been a year since the bee's was last buzzing
The days grow longer but the nights get shorter
So I'm living every night ninth inning fourth quarter
Flock the women all together I'm an excellent whorder
And you know I'm hitting 3 like Kyle Korver from the corner
Man you know what I'm on, that Chicago Bullshit
Unselfish with my balls and I carry that true grit
So move it, shake your little body like Boom Boom
It's a celebration bitches paain t nothing like those summer nightsrty under this blue moon
Cuz nights like these fill the void for this emcee
Cuz without em I'm like 马克 Twain's initials... MT

(Chorus)
As the sun goes down then the party ignites
Cuz we've been waiting all winter for these summer nights
driving with the windows down so we bump at the lights
cuz this music get's loud on these summer nights
Say hey yo if you feel me and let's party til the morning light
Say hey yo if you feel man ain't nothing like these summer nights

(Verse 2)
I've been working all day, slaving in this cubicle
two-tired like a motorcycle popping pharacuticals
just to do the usual day to day tasks
doing what I gotta do to keep this boss off my AV儿劣
and put keep some money in my pockets man I trying to build wealth
gotta think about the fute plus these bills don't pay themselves
so go ahead get ain t nothing like those summer nightsloose like the sleave on a wizard
not everything in life will come out the way that you pictured
so pour yourself some liqour with just a splash of mixer
pull out your middle finger give your best to Mr. Winter
Everybody looking good dressed to kill for real
Cuz if you don't say your the best tell me who the hell will?(Shout-out to phife-Dawg)
So sing your song like there's nobody listening
light up the night like the stars that are glistnening
Love your life and make the best fo the night
And don't worry bout a thing cuz everything gon' be alright
A little generic but not bad. If none of this is true I wouldn't rap about it. 6/10
topics been done a million times its an ok rap keep trying. sorry